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New (short) application Jor Garan
« on: March 08, 2017, 08:00:09 AM »
Hi, I'm a returned after many years. Here's the following basic info about my character

Character details

Character Name: Jor Garan
Character Age: 45
Character Species: Bajoran
Gender: Male
Character Family:
Character Bio: Jor was born from a typical Prophets devoted family during Cardassian occupation. They lived on Dharen containing Campo, surrounded by a warm community. He grew up under restrictive condition due to the prisoner status, without much food, a real house and educated only by his parents.
Then at 15 years old he escaped the Camp and joined the Maquis, where he applied in several undercover missions to attack Cardassian facilities and to free bajoran slaves.
During one mission he's been captured by starfleet and, after be detected furtherly by Federation, Captain Janis Sempre of Operation department offered him to join the Academy.
At 21 years old He applied to StarFleet Academy, graduating at 25 years old. He took duties in several ships and outpost as Scientific/Technical officer. He's worked even on StarFleet Research and development division on new technologies research.

Department: Science (technical research - R&D)

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Re: New (short) application Jor Garan
« Reply #1 on: March 08, 2017, 01:37:20 PM »
Hi, I'm a returned after many years. Here's the following basic info about my character

Character details

Character Name: Jor Garan
Character Age: 45
Character Species: Bajoran
Gender: Male
Character Family:
Character Bio: Jor was born from a typical Prophets devoted family during Cardassian occupation. They lived on Dharen containing Campo, surrounded by a warm community. He grew up under restrictive condition due to the prisoner status, without much food, a real house and educated only by his parents.
Then at 15 years old he escaped the Camp and joined the Maquis, where he applied in several undercover missions to attack Cardassian facilities and to free bajoran slaves.
During one mission he's been captured by starfleet and, after be detected furtherly by Federation, Captain Janis Sempre of Operation department offered him to join the Academy.
At 21 years old He applied to StarFleet Academy, graduating at 25 years old. He took duties in several ships and outpost as Scientific/Technical officer. He's worked even on StarFleet Research and development division on new technologies research.

Department: Science (technical research - R&D)


Jor aka Roberto,

Thanks for creating a new application.

Can you please help me remember who you played before?

Initially, we would likely put you in the Science Department of the Tempest.

Per your email, here is the image of Gerald Butler that most matches your request: http://scifiavatars.com/viewer/big_viewer.php?img_dir=avatars&image=307_butler-gerard2-150.png

Can you please provide a sample post to complete your application?

Thanks in advance,

Kirok

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Re: New (short) application Jor Garan
« Reply #2 on: March 09, 2017, 05:50:44 AM »
Kirok,

Is original account on the forums is Talok. I though it was Tanibak first but did a little digging. Still Jor is from 2013 based on this.

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Re: New (short) application Jor Garan
« Reply #3 on: March 27, 2017, 03:31:25 PM »
Hi, Here's a sample post about Jor Garan. For the assignement I've appreciated very much for the Scientific Dpt. I tthink it's exaclty what I wish!!

JOR GARAN's SAMPLE POST

Jor entered the Science division Office. He searched with a rapid glance
the Officer in command there and He found a woman, in blue shirt that
was given order, dressing the insignia of a Lieutenant commander.

Jor directed himself toward her and then stood in attemption: "Ma'am.
I'm Cadet Garan, I'm currently in charge of investigation upon some kinds of
Centaurs of Myth's views, ." He waited for a response.
The woman said "Relax, Cadet. I'm the chief of enginneers, Lorena
Mcgennit. So you've some questions to ask related the matter of
centaurs?"

Jor nodded "Exaclty"

"Go on, Cadet. I've got some minutes before I must manage a problem on
Warp drive, so ask quickly, as you can" and she was smiling in
response

"Well, How were the physical and psycological condition of the Gamma3
Team, in the aftermath of the visions?"

"Fine. They seemed in perfect condition. "

" The cantaurs were viewed in contemporary or in shifted moments?"

"They've been seen in different moments form different member of the
team. But the vision were the same, in any described particular"

Jor seemed worried: "Ma'am only a last question.Did they found some
problems in air conduction?"

Lorena nodded this time: "Yes, some kind of strange mold"

"Mold?" that's sound interesting" said Jor.  "Ma'am, Is there are any sample of mold?"

She nodded and showed him a report concerning the found mold:
it was a mold of unknown origin, whose spores appeared as strong allergens.

"May I have directly a small portion of these molds?"

====



Lorena seemed surprised " Wait a moment, please"-. She turned and
entered Engineering LCARs and took a look to the Cargo Bay
activities".

"Mmm...yes.There were several containers. All internal of the ship,
and only was that bas beamed up the same day from Caledar colony. It
had to contain some innovative scientific device developed from the
UFP outpost"

"Interesting...Have we more information about it? It's here currently?"

"No, it's been transported to USS Delailah at 5.33 of yesterday. The
senior office that managed the cointainer is Lieutenant Ber Koran, of
Daystrom Institute, a Researcher that he's been in charge here for a
couple of month. You may find him here around, if you wish talk to
him"

Jor thanked the superior officer and leaded out of the Enginnering Office.

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Re: New (short) application Jor Garan
« Reply #4 on: March 28, 2017, 12:31:31 AM »
Hi, Here's a sample post about Jor Garan. For the assignement I've appreciated very much for the Scientific Dpt. I tthink it's exaclty what I wish!!

JOR GARAN's SAMPLE POST

Jor entered the Science division Office. He searched with a rapid glance
the Officer in command there and He found a woman, in blue shirt that
was given order, dressing the insignia of a Lieutenant commander.

Jor directed himself toward her and then stood in attemption: "Ma'am.
I'm Cadet Garan, I'm currently in charge of investigation upon some kinds of
Centaurs of Myth's views, ." He waited for a response.
The woman said "Relax, Cadet. I'm the chief of enginneers, Lorena
Mcgennit. So you've some questions to ask related the matter of
centaurs?"

Jor nodded "Exaclty"

"Go on, Cadet. I've got some minutes before I must manage a problem on
Warp drive, so ask quickly, as you can" and she was smiling in
response

"Well, How were the physical and psycological condition of the Gamma3
Team, in the aftermath of the visions?"

"Fine. They seemed in perfect condition. "

" The cantaurs were viewed in contemporary or in shifted moments?"

"They've been seen in different moments form different member of the
team. But the vision were the same, in any described particular"

Jor seemed worried: "Ma'am only a last question.Did they found some
problems in air conduction?"

Lorena nodded this time: "Yes, some kind of strange mold"

"Mold?" that's sound interesting" said Jor.  "Ma'am, Is there are any sample of mold?"

She nodded and showed him a report concerning the found mold:
it was a mold of unknown origin, whose spores appeared as strong allergens.

"May I have directly a small portion of these molds?"

====



Lorena seemed surprised " Wait a moment, please"-. She turned and
entered Engineering LCARs and took a look to the Cargo Bay
activities".

"Mmm...yes.There were several containers. All internal of the ship,
and only was that bas beamed up the same day from Caledar colony. It
had to contain some innovative scientific device developed from the
UFP outpost"

"Interesting...Have we more information about it? It's here currently?"

"No, it's been transported to USS Delailah at 5.33 of yesterday. The
senior office that managed the cointainer is Lieutenant Ber Koran, of
Daystrom Institute, a Researcher that he's been in charge here for a
couple of month. You may find him here around, if you wish talk to
him"

Jor thanked the superior officer and leaded out of the Enginnering Office.


Jor,

A nice sample post.

Let's put you on the Shran with me and James Hawke.

You can jump right into our mission.

Here is a like to the Away Team part of things:

http://www.shadowfleet.org/forum/index.php/topic,7657.msg151104.html#msg151104

Welcome aboard,

Kirok

 

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